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early morning
waking up
it's still dark
outside
but inside,
not as dark
the other room's light
still on
early morning
still taste you
it's still dark
outside
but inside,
I know you're far
wonder if we're
still on
all alone, I'm
waking up
looking right
outside
where it is
not as dark
the other room's light
turned off
early morning
thinking of you
it's not dark
inside
waking up
it's still dark
outside
but inside,
not as dark
the other room's light
still on
early morning
still taste you
it's still dark
outside
but inside,
I know you're far
wonder if we're
still on
all alone, I'm
waking up
looking right
outside
where it is
not as dark
the other room's light
turned off
early morning
thinking of you
it's not dark
inside
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that's cool. I like how you only give a little detail each stanza and I like the repetition. I think the repetition gave the sense of time going by, time in boredom, everything is simple without much growth or decline in the text. It's nice.