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were you there?

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were you there

when I grabbed your hand
and spun into you
you looked at me, confused
completely unaware
I had taken this dance
without asking

when I kissed your lips
and silently told you
you closed your eyes, confused
wondering how I dared
to leave a mark on you
conspicuously

when I sang my song
and sang only for you
you listened, so confused
wondering if I dared
to try to make you care
to love me

were you there?
fish.
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Dorian-Magic's avatar
this is random but it connects... so I 'spose it's not random. I got into a deep conversation with a girl who was trying her absolute hardest to be with me. I felt nothing so it never really happened, but before she gave up, we talked about how first impressions and individual events can affect a relationship and be seen from seperate perspectives. I came to a general understanding that there is no one person for anyone. A person, in my opinion, is compatible with several others but what links the twoo are the individual events. If a person, for examble, is interested from the start of knowing someone, they take the time to observe that person, however only through tinted glass. Their vision is distorted even though they are watching closely. This brings me to my next point, best relationship, to me, will be relationships formed by two friends who through time grow affections for one another. This was random because it was my thought at the time, but it sorta connected. I'm sorry.